el_jefe, visual aids and everything! That rocks, thanks!
Sorry I have been gone for a bit. Life as a Theater teacher at my school is VERY different than most high school.
I do appreciate all the comments on my first part of my story. It give me the strength to stay up late trying to finish it.
el_jefe: I'm sure that Brady will have a talk to the previous owner of the car and ask why it was modified.
The visual aids are awesome. However I come from a family of police officers and firemen. My uncles and cousins always called them clips and it felt right. I will keep it in mind when I write other stories.
Saint Peter. I'm working on the rest of it I haven't written with Dragon in quite awhile so its taking me a bit to get back into that writing mindset.
I'm trying to get it to my editor, that would be my wife: the tech writer, as soon as I can.
I just modified this post. I made a lot of typos.
Sorry about that. (feeling shamed)
<Note to self: stop the sleep typing. It never works out.>
