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« Reply #15 on: October 06, 2009, 06:24:46 pm »

This probably just points out more of the flaws in my character... but I liked Lexy best.
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« Reply #16 on: October 06, 2009, 06:54:32 pm »

This probably just points out more of the flaws in my character... but I liked Lexy best.

Oh, nothing wrong with Lexy.  She's the perfectionist, type-A, hyperresponsible, carry all the parental expectations, quintessential oldest sibling, who's taken on way more than she needed to with both siblings, but can sometimes be a little exasperating.  (I can picture Fred or Chloe describing her thusly: "Lexy thinks the universe revolves around her, as in if she can just be perfect enough, everything else will fall into place.")  It's just that she wouldn't be immediately trusting of FBI agents inquiring after her hopefully-off-the-drugs-now baby sister, and, well, future lawyer.



Triple ditto.  I also hope Lexy-the-excessively-responsible-big-sister-and-law-student isn't too much of a headache if/when he does...


Are you kidding? He'd recruit her.

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« Reply #17 on: October 06, 2009, 08:03:25 pm »

Good work! And oh, yes, what Bear said. Bwah-hah-hah!
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« Reply #18 on: October 06, 2009, 08:16:13 pm »

I can't wait 'til we find out what Bear and Emma (Bear and Bull?  But somehow Bear seems more like a first name or a nickname rather than a surname) are chortling about!
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« Reply #19 on: October 06, 2009, 08:28:13 pm »

I can't wait 'til we find out what Bear and Emma (Bear and Bull?  But somehow Bear seems more like a first name or a nickname rather than a surname) are chortling about!

The Bull and the Bear.
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« Reply #20 on: October 06, 2009, 09:12:01 pm »

I can't wait 'til we find out what Bear and Emma (Bear and Bull?  But somehow Bear seems more like a first name or a nickname rather than a surname) are chortling about!

Well, it's Not her surname, which might be why.
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« Reply #21 on: October 07, 2009, 08:11:27 pm »

This is a really good story.  Really.

I like it.
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« Reply #22 on: October 10, 2009, 11:48:30 am »


Nice!
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