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« Reply #120 on: March 29, 2012, 01:00:51 pm » |
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Bad news: The beleaguered Web Elf sometimes takes a while to get updates in place. Good news: The *spoiler-free* Reading Order page on the wiki is usually right up to date with dozens of volunteers (well, Ed, anyway) providing updates with alacrity. That page also includes links for all the DVD extras. Bad news: Season 4 episode 4 has not aired yet. Good news: Season 4 episode 4 is scheduled to air this Sunday! Bad news: No more. Yet. |
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« Reply #121 on: March 29, 2012, 10:38:17 pm » |
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Also, welcome!
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« Reply #122 on: March 30, 2012, 07:37:17 am » |
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Yes, I see that what I had mistaken for a whole big cookie was an adorable little petit-four.
Jeffy: Excellent. Thank you for that pointer.
Lioness: Also thank you, although, the message board's nomenclature to the contrary, I'm not *exactly* a 'newbie.' I first posted a message here over 18 months ago. I just don't do it very often. {chuckle}
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« Reply #123 on: April 02, 2012, 09:30:50 pm » |
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In Latency:
Arthur "pitched the bridge of his nose" probably should be "pinched"
There's a garbled apostrophe near the word "earnestness"
Another garbled character in de Sade's name right after Chaz hands Murder in the Second City to Hafs.
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« Reply #124 on: April 02, 2012, 10:13:44 pm » |
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Dwayne is an enthusiastic typist. He is not always an accurate one.
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"I wanted to tell you both. I've met someone."
"Danny, that's good," his mother said, sounding strange and strained and cautious. "What's--"
"His name's Grayson. He works for the State Department."
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« Reply #125 on: April 04, 2012, 04:54:28 pm » |
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Also in Latency, the location line right at the top of Act IV is missing bold tags. |
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« Reply #126 on: April 04, 2012, 06:52:54 pm » |
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in this part of Act I I'll call Reyes," Hafidha said.
Woodbridge, VA
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Still will I harvest beauty where it grows... --Edna ST. Vincent Millay
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« Reply #127 on: April 28, 2012, 11:41:07 am » |
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I'm putting together Book 11, and I wanted to thank everyone for their contributions to this topic.
Poor Duane is horribly overworked, so I don't know whether we'll get to correcting typos on the site and in previous ebooks, but it's on the To Do List.
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« Reply #128 on: August 06, 2012, 06:40:13 am » |
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http://www.shadowunit.org/wildcard.html#Act IV "You see what I can do? Your bars can't hold me! Your boxes won't keep me in!" Morrison's grin was more like a rictus now, taut and vicious. "I did it myself, and I spent a whole month in that scrapyard practicing it myself, and once I'm done, none of you are ever going to tell me what I can or can't do again—"
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« Reply #129 on: August 10, 2012, 12:50:59 pm » |
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Wildcard, missing paragraph break in here (or something. Anyway it took me a bit to figure out the "I can see..." bit was Arthur talking again): "We're not plotting," Chaz said. "I can see it on your nasty little profiler faces," he replied, cheery. Wary. Smart guy. |
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