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Author Topic: 3x06, "Uniform"  (Read 9859 times)
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Jedikalos
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« Reply #135 on: December 27, 2010, 07:06:26 pm »

I just ready your new story and wanted to say thanks (and will also make a small trip over to paypal to send some more concrete thanks). I loved the way we got to view the members of the team from other people's perspective throughout the story. You folks put together one of my favorite recurring entertainments.
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« Reply #136 on: December 27, 2010, 08:59:35 pm »

Thank you!

We always like praise. *g* (And conversation, actually. Conversation rocks.)
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« Reply #137 on: January 06, 2011, 05:47:19 pm »

On a reread, I saw this:

Once your Dr. Mitchell got here, she recommended we separate off a dedicated task force, and send most of the district back to their regular jobs

Shouldn't that be "Dr. Marshall" instead? She's mentioned later in the scene, and has already been introduced as on of Tan's co-workers.
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« Reply #138 on: January 06, 2011, 06:38:10 pm »

I think you're correct. Want to post that to the typos thread, so we can be sure to catch it in revisions?
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