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« on: May 21, 2012, 05:28:39 am »

It is a man's own mind, not his enemy or foe, that lures him to evil ways.
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Act 1

J. Edgar Hoover Building,
Washington D.C.
Tuesday, 4th November 2008
2323 hours EDT

 11:23PM in the WTF bullpit, not quite the dead of night, but close enough for government work, and with most of the team in Washington State, as opposed to Washington, D.C., the place just echoed every last keyclick or scuff of paper. Daphne Worth leaned back in her chair, rubbing her eyes and working the core muscle groups in her back. She really needed to get up and walk around, or at least stand and stretch, but the file in front of her was almost done and she wanted to get out and head home to her new wife.

 Going home to her sweetie every night was nice, she could curl up with her head in Trish’s lap and pretend there was a normal world outside her door. But missing out on the call for the away team meant not being there to back up Wabbit and the Monotreme and she missed her alternate-sibs, Live Journal and SMS messaging not withstanding.

 Daphs sighed and turned her attention back to the screen and her explanation as to why the case in front of her was weird, but not WTF-weird. She was a profiler, she could have worked it up properly, there was enough detail to shape the initial profile, but that was what they had the Behavioural Analysis Unit down the hall for. The Anomalous Crimes Task Force was targeted at a very specific brand of weird; anomalous weird, cracked weird, mad-screaming-effing-terror weird, and that was why they had sent the rest of the team off to Seattle on Monday, and why the case in front of her just wasn’t WTF.

http://davidg-flatoutart.blogspot.co.uk/2012/05/shadow-unit-open-mind.html

(At least I got something productive done during my absence!)
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« Reply #1 on: May 21, 2012, 06:29:02 am »

Very nice, liked this a lot!
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« Reply #2 on: May 21, 2012, 08:32:52 am »

Nifty!
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« Reply #3 on: May 21, 2012, 08:56:30 am »

Oh, well played, Mr. G, well played!
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« Reply #4 on: May 21, 2012, 03:30:47 pm »

Thanks!
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« Reply #5 on: May 21, 2012, 04:42:01 pm »

Thanks for the unexpected SU fix!
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« Reply #6 on: May 22, 2012, 10:36:57 am »

Thanks for the chicken.
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« Reply #7 on: May 22, 2012, 10:46:16 am »

Someone should have told her that you should have an open mind, but not so open your brains fall out.

...I'm going to Hell, aren't I?
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« Reply #8 on: May 22, 2012, 12:25:43 pm »

Oh, David? Madeline Frost. Not Miranda.
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« Reply #9 on: May 23, 2012, 11:24:39 pm »

Oh, David? Madeline Frost. Not Miranda.

Argh! Igor the copyeditor has been taken out and anomalised....

Both occurrences have now been fixed.
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« Reply #10 on: May 23, 2012, 11:39:37 pm »

Someone should have told her that you should have an open mind, but not so open your brains fall out.

...I'm going to Hell, aren't I?

Hey, this is the Anomaly we're discussing, it'll do all it can to help you on your way Wink
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« Reply #11 on: May 23, 2012, 11:43:51 pm »

BTW: Did people notice the hidden extra?
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« Reply #12 on: May 24, 2012, 09:03:29 am »

BTW: Did people notice the hidden extra?

Uh.. Yeah!  Of course!  I was just saving it to read today, that's all.

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"I wanted to tell you both. I've met someone."

"Danny, that's good," his mother said, sounding strange and strained and cautious. "What's--"

"His name's Grayson. He works for the State Department."
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« Reply #13 on: May 24, 2012, 01:10:57 pm »

BTW: Did people notice the hidden extra?
Uh.. Yeah!  Of course!  I was just saving it to read today, that's all.
Exactly!  I knew about it the whole time!

Good stuff, by the way Smiley
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« Reply #14 on: May 26, 2012, 02:08:04 pm »

Wow. (Both the episode, and the DVD extra. Which was fairly local to me, and I've hiked/camped over there. You could hide practically forever in the Hoh rainforest and never be found. )
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