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« Reply #1 on: November 05, 2010, 09:22:42 pm » |
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He's a semi-aquatic egg-laying mammal OF ACTION... "Hey, where's Villette?"
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« Reply #2 on: November 05, 2010, 09:33:52 pm » |
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Those are great!
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« Reply #3 on: November 05, 2010, 09:45:52 pm » |
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Chaz: "As if puberty weren't stressful enough."
Todd: "See? That's why we're better than all those other law enforcement agencies. Correct use of the subjunctive."
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Why, this is Hell, nor are we out of it.
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« Reply #4 on: November 05, 2010, 10:57:14 pm » |
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Oh, nice! (What do we need to do to encourage you to keep writing these? Or further, longer stories?)
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Still will I harvest beauty where it grows... --Edna ST. Vincent Millay
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Scedasticity
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« Reply #5 on: November 12, 2010, 09:57:21 am » |
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Thanks! (What do we need to do to encourage you to keep writing these? Or further, longer stories?)
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Why, this is Hell, nor are we out of it.
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« Reply #6 on: November 12, 2010, 08:52:18 pm » |
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(What do we need to do to encourage you to keep writing these? Or further, longer stories?)
Feedback. Deeeetailed feedback. [/quote] *whimper* I am very, very bad at that. Conversation I can do; analysis, not so much this last decade or so (cognitive function damage, yadda yadda, hate hate stabbity hate), though I can sometimes add a bit to what someone else has said. |
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Still will I harvest beauty where it grows... --Edna ST. Vincent Millay
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« Reply #7 on: November 13, 2010, 06:53:11 pm » |
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*whimper* I am very, very bad at that. Conversation I can do; analysis, not so much this last decade or so (cognitive function damage, yadda yadda, hate hate stabbity hate), though I can sometimes add a bit to what someone else has said.
Well, maybe not so much "detailed" as "specific", if that makes sense? ...But there should be more at some point, anyway. |
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« Reply #8 on: November 13, 2010, 07:00:05 pm » |
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Oh, you want *specific* suggestions? The next one should be longer.
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« Reply #9 on: November 13, 2010, 08:01:48 pm » |
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Oh, you want *specific* suggestions? The next one should be longer.
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« Reply #10 on: November 14, 2010, 03:06:32 pm » |
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So, if you could pick one for me to expand, which one would it be? (Making no promises, you understand. ) |
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« Reply #11 on: November 15, 2010, 06:15:32 am » |
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Would you do one about Alby's cooking skills and disasters thereof?
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« Reply #12 on: November 15, 2010, 08:30:08 am » |
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This isn't so much about what you should write as what you have written...
I hope you realize how utterly non-derivative this is. I mean, yes, technically it's kind of Shadow Unit, but only about as much so as Bujold's first book is about a federation officer and a Klingon on an unsettled planet.
What makes it work so well is the strength of your characters, and the entertainingly but also painfully messed up family dynamic. Which is great. And hysterical.
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Beauty, insight, and a bibliography.
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« Reply #13 on: November 21, 2010, 03:13:38 pm » |
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I'd love to see more about Alby's cooking adventures, and misadventures, too.
I'd also love to see more about her hospital visit re: the flu shot.
*applauds*
*wants more*
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"There's no good way of doing it," she said. "Dying. And they're alone. Even when you're right there." Daphne Worth 1.01 Breathe
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« Reply #14 on: November 23, 2010, 07:55:36 pm » |
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As always, I love it and I want to read more. I've been in love with this story since part 1.
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Daphne: You can do this. You just have to stand up on it.
Chaz: Can't.
Daphne: Stand up on it, damn you.
Chaz: On belay?
Daphne: Belay on.
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